MAP 3

This feedback given by my tutor shows how I have improved since MAP 2. It shows the strengths in my work and what band I am currently working at. The first page evaluates my Research and Planning in which I am working at band 3. The second page evaluates the most recent music video (band 3) and the ancillary texts (band 4).

The final page shows the action plan after receiving my MAP 3. This shows the changes I have decided to make to enhance my grade.

For research and planning, I have decided to add more posts and organise them under the pages on my blog. This will include posts on theorists, location recce's and possibly extra research to show how we came up with our final products.

For several reasons we have decided to get rid of the idea of our central character visiting his grandmother at the care home. This is because the shots we have were very dark and grainy and didn't look as good as the other shots we had. In order to fix this we have reinvented the plot so that he is now visiting her grave. This will require extra filming and editing in tweak week.

The ancillaries received 10/10 marks and therefore do not need any extra work putting into them.

Although I am not required to attend the AST session on Monday, I will be attending as to improve on my Research and Planning.